Welcome to our planet.
In the post-9/11
world, no one really uses the word "detente" as a means
of reducing the possibility of war and of achieving
peaceful coexistence between different social and
political systems. The dogs of war have changed their
habits so much.
Those 11,700 words you have submitted are rather a
punishment.
One
wonders if you can restate your argument in 700 words or
less, which is really 6 per cent of your thesis. It is
daunting to think what would be left of your argument
if one were to chop off 94 per cent of your
thesis without your personal involvement?
Your statement, "The
only way out is sanity of coexistence," sounds
interesting but when husband and wife cannot coexist
peacefully, how can the nation be at peace with itself
or its neighbours?
Domestic violence is
the microcosm of the world at war. What detente are you
talking about? The Cold War of the 1970s and '80s?
Rashid
Mughal
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